Writing the Red Herring

© 2019 DiAnn Mills

Mystery and suspense writers value the challenge of a red herring, a clue designed to deceive and mislead the characters and readers.

  • For the writer, developing a red herring takes time and imagination.
  • For the protagonist, discovering the real culprit requires skill and insight.
  • For the reader, absorbing details becomes a challenge of wit.

Incorporating a red herring into a plot isn’t a series of misunderstandings that label the protagonist as ill-equipped to investigate a crime. Instead, the technique adds an additional level of complexity for an unpredictable story.

The following 10 tips will help the writer successfully create a red herring.

  1. Incorporate the red herring character into the fabric of the story. The technique isn’t an add-on when the plot lacks tension, stress, and conflict.
  2. The red herring is an innocent character who has motive to commit a crime while the real culprit has nothing established pointing to his involvement.
  3. During the investigation, clues aren’t easily achieved and are obtained in a deductive manner.
  4. The findings are unexpected, and indicators point to the innocent character.
  5. Establish an antagonistic setting that works against the red herring. Be selective of where scenes take place. For example, the character frequents the same coffee house as the victim. Perhaps an argument took place there.
  6. The red herring may or may not have a plausible alibi. For example, the character may be afraid and lie about his whereabouts during the time of the crime or request another character vouch for him. The investigator discovers the ruse, adding more indications of guilt.
  7. Sensory perception has the power to persuade. For example, a distinct smell is detected at the crime, and the scent is associated with the red herring.
  8. It’s natural for other characters and readers to assume the red herring is responsible. The investigators have worked hard to establish his guilt.
  9. At the climax, the investigator evaluates statements, evidence, body language, and tangible items that move the case in a different direction. This character reveals insight regarding the guilty character that others or readers may have overlooked.
  10. Stop sign! Don’t purposely mislead or deceive the reader. A red herring is believable based on credible evidence.

Red herrings are an essential part of crime and mystery stories. How are you creating a maze of evidence in your writing?
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DiAnn Mills is a bestselling author who believes her readers should expect an adventure. She creates action-packed, suspense-filled novels to thrill readers. Her titles have appeared on the CBA and ECPA bestseller lists; won two Christy Awards; and been finalists for the RITA, Daphne Du Maurier, Inspirational Readers’ Choice, and Carol Award contests. She is the director of the Blue Ridge Mountain Christian Writers ConferenceMountainside Marketing Retreat, and Mountainside Novelist Retreat with social media specialist Edie Melson.